WATCO joining a gym for female college students?
Enthymeme: Joining a gym will increase overall health in any female college student because 24 hour fitness believes in personal trainers.
Assumption: Whatever believes in personal trainers will increase the overall health in any female college students.
Audience: Me
Ethos: The guy was obviously someone who worked at 24-hour fitness and knew what he was doing.
Pathos: Talked about the greatness of a personal trainer...
Logos: He started out with the really expensive deals to make the normal ones sound very cheap by comparison.
Sufficient: Yes, but not succinct. I finally got the information I wanted...almost an hour later.
Typical:
Accurate: I'm sure it was accurate.
Relevant: I just wanted to go in with my friend who was a member of 24 hour fitness and get one of her 3-day passes that she can give to friends. Because of some reason I couldn't understand, they refused to give those to us, and instead after a long deliberation decided we could have a 1 day pass because they were that generous. They next, instead of letting us go work out and go to the class we wanted to go to, led us over to a desk and had us fill out our information and then proceed to tell us about the different plans they had. This would have been nice, since I was looking for a gym at the time, except that most of the plans cost over $100/month, which is way too much for a poor college student to be paying. Most of them included personal trainers that would not only help us work out, but dictate what we should eat in order to lose weight. Now, I'm not a model, but I'd like to think that I'm not so fat that I need a personal trainer telling me what to do. Not for the price they charge anyways. It took them forever to get to a package I would have been remotely interested in, but by that time I felt it was pretty obvious that they were in it for the money and I was really tired of hearing their sales representative talk. So most of their argument wasn't relevant for the audience and it's a pity they didn't notice.
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